All Comments on 'A Scarlett Rose: I do declare!'

did you have to end capt. doodle like that...right when miss rose was havin such fun....wink...blue

is a fitting end and appears a sequel could be forthcoming. I've pulled out my favorite spot:

Lips played and teased

while breasts were squeezed.

Some quick darting glances

and to the bushes they're dashing.

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i know that this piece is of a romantic nature and such. in a subliminal kind of way it has a blue and white collar play to it. i'd be referring to the tussle. this had a nice flow to it too art. wonderfully written.....don

Ya gotta be kiddin' me...

WooHooo~!! I loved it.

What a way to go huh. Poor Scarlett...

I loved the whole series. Each one has a very differ. quality of writing and humor I loved.

You do know how to hold a reader in the palm of your hand.

Yes, more please~~

An excellent finish Art,

well written as always

and another great adventure.

I loved it!

Thanks.

~ J

As usual Art your series are enchanting and realistic! I love the visuals here that are displayed in your rhetoric. The secret I love that you leave the ending to the heart and mind of the reader let them finish their own version! You are a master of the serial poem!

thank you for the read!

du lac~