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Satyr61Satyr613 months ago

Extremely clever & very well done. I love this.

ThatNewGuyThatNewGuy2 months ago

Once again, loved this: both the overarching theme and the carefully selected details. I don't know why, but the word choice in this line--- "crimped"---just felt so right:

"Eyes wide open, mouth crimped closed."

And that final line just sticks the landing. Well done!

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