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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 16 years ago
Promising!

This poem holds so much promise! I really like this: To drink in the sun and cry out the moon

To reach for stars and to pull my hand back to find

Dust, everything turns to ash to float on the air ~

Thanks for the read!

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