- Erotic Poetry
- A Simple Afternoon
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Hair cascading down shoulders to supple breasts
Blond hair folding in ringlettes, silky strands
Hard nipples ache, kneaded and groped
By strong and hairy hands
Her eyes closed, a mask of bliss
Mouth open in scream and moan
Gasping, she takes his swollen member deep
Every inch of his veined bone
Her back arched, shoulders slumped
Her belly high and near.
His head dipped in pleasure’s high
Mouth whispering in her ear:
“Bitch cum for me, cum so hard!”
His voice echoing in her head
She clutched the sheets, tight and firm
Shaking the unkempt bed
With explosive need her hips thrust out
And meet his in flooded rush
Her mound erupts, wets and squirts
Geysers, flows and gush
Her mind erased of all but him
No fear of harm or disaster,
Her all consumed by the desperate need
Of her strong and sexy Master
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI see what you're trying to say. It makes sense to an extent. However, the author is following an A,B,C,B rhythmic pattern. While your suggestion would be grammatically correct, I believe it's an artistic choice formatted to keep the flow ongoing in the author's peice? Of course, I might be wrong. Just my two cents. :)
Anonymousover 4 years agoNot so sexy, but it reminds me of the time I thought I was raped by an ape but it turned out to be my unshaved husband. A few errors of grammar and tense but what the heck. I fumbled as well trying to help, it ain't easy being a poet.
ex.With explosive need her hips thrust out
And meet his in flooded rush
Her mound erupts, wets and squirts
Geysers, flows and gush
Explosively her hips thrust
to meet his rushing flood
Her wet mound erupts and squirts
Geysers flow and gush
