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by Shotokan07

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
hmmm

I like this, but the acrostic, being rather obviou,s there is really no need for the CAPS on the final Shapes :)

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

But to be an even more effective acrostic

It would have been 'better' to say it all in a 6 line poem.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
mental sweets.

Acrostic poems ~ special delicacies ~ brain candy.

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