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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Tears slide away

In weather that's appropriate ~

Some can be mild storms of joy

While others, tumultuous affairs of great pain...

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Tears...

The tears metaphor for rain works well here. Reversed ~ tears are only rain to make love grow.

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