All Comments on 'A Time Promise'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
A bit.....

...Hallmarky and sing-song for me - but there's an ear out there for this too. Keep writing.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Shows up as a '98 write where I said,

"Vows exchanged ~ one can only hope spelling's gotten better in 8 yrs."

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
promises kept

With a song in my heart ~ I behold your adorable face. Where's my ticket? I'm about to take a sentimental journey.

Lovely rendering.

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