All Comments on 'A View of the Garden'

and it's very tight and has lots of depth. good use of metaphor as well. i'm very moved by it. nice write.

the language is beautifully handled / for the life of me, i can't figure out why this isn't drawing attention today / i think it's fine and pure writing /

but this one is not as bursting as most JD4G's offerings, its more subdued, it is a good poem though, it just seems "different"

desperation in a confined space - A man who claims to be a "wannabe" poet

Fuck the "wannabe" brother, I do not think anyone else could do this.