- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Abandon
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Go ahead
abandon all reasonable thought.
Get Your cannons out,
aim straight and high.
Shoot...
Blast...
Take'm all out of commission.
Show no mercy
for the weak, softhearted,
or unknowing.
No rhyme or thought
can get through.
You are so witty,
charming, all knowing.
Mean...Cruel...
Heartless Baboon.
So perfect You!
Take careful store
of all that's good.
Blow it to smithereens!
Grind it to dust
beneath
Your godlike feet.
Abandon the writing,
You know so well.
Announce to all others,
spouting off
Your own stupidity.
Take charge and command
us Lesser Mortals,
who have Dared
to question Your superiority.
Riddle me this,
Girl...
How the hell do you sleep at night?
~edit~chomp~hack~grind~
~do your damndest~
*Still Smiling in RhymeVille~
- COMMENTS
swallowedscreamover 16 years agoas this poem was submitted a while ago, if the chomp she took out of the subjects ass, has healed?Haha. I do so love when a person pushed, pushes back. Well done!
duddle146over 17 years agoAfter reading this rendering ~ I know how a poet reads an undesirable person the riot act. She writes a poem. Wonderful read.
LeBrozover 18 years agoMemo to self:
Don't ever raise the ire of RF.
She finds the "Special Interest Groups" that burrow underground; nothing is safe around her.
And as for Anon.....wonder which of the clique THAT could be......seems to be multiple personalities with severely challenged verbal skills......perhaps a bit delusional as she demands all conform to her poetry paradigm.....but are these blah blah shit shit rants so necessary....this is like intelligence of a whole new --- lower --- order.
dcpoet44almost 19 years agoin this and has some sarcasm bleeding in these lines......nicely done......don
MRWIGGLEWORMalmost 19 years agowouldnt want to be in those crosshairs the rhymefairy may turn into the lymrick lucifer lol
Anonymousalmost 19 years agohowever, expressed can give energy to the source...to me tis better to focus on what one wants and not what one doesn't.. but, your opinion is a valid one...bluerains
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agoSorry it has taken me so long to say this but It's great to have you back! Where the heck you been girl? Lit hasn't been the same without you! Great poem as usual I see you havent lost your flare for poetry, you are back with a vengence girl! lol.
Anonymous, piss off no one wants to hear what you have to say, it's sad and pathetic and down right bloody rude.
Welcome back RhymeFairy xxx
~ J
