All Comments on 'Abandon'

Riddle me this,

Oh Holy one...

or if that is not acceptable~~~

Riddle me this,

Mr. Untouchable

aka~

Mr. Anonymous

yeah I am talkin to you!

a lil poem... Just for you~

Now that's what I call "explosive" ~ I enjoyed this poem very much!

~Honey

the finale on the fourth of july can not compare!!! good work mentioned in the Sunday Reviews

du~

was that supposed to be a poem? sorry must of missed that through all the shit you write!!

Sorry it has taken me so long to say this but It's great to have you back! Where the heck you been girl? Lit hasn't been the same without you! Great poem as usual I see you havent lost your flare for poetry, you are back with a vengence girl! lol.

Anonymous, piss off no one wants to hear what you have to say, it's sad and pathetic and down right bloody rude.

Welcome back RhymeFairy xxx

~ J

however, expressed can give energy to the source...to me tis better to focus on what one wants and not what one doesn't.. but, your opinion is a valid one...bluerains

wouldnt want to be in those crosshairs the rhymefairy may turn into the lymrick lucifer lol

in this and has some sarcasm bleeding in these lines......nicely done......don

now, stick around and write some more!

I love rants and this is a fucking great rant. Rant on, rant on!!!

BD

Memo to self:

Don't ever raise the ire of RF.

She finds the "Special Interest Groups" that burrow underground; nothing is safe around her.

And as for Anon.....wonder which of the clique THAT could be......seems to be multiple personalities with severely challenged verbal skills......perhaps a bit delusional as she demands all conform to her poetry paradigm.....but are these blah blah shit shit rants so necessary....this is like intelligence of a whole new --- lower --- order.

rhyme rant very very well...great work.

After reading this rendering ~ I know how a poet reads an undesirable person the riot act. She writes a poem. Wonderful read.

as this poem was submitted a while ago, if the chomp she took out of the subjects ass, has healed?Haha. I do so love when a person pushed, pushes back. Well done!