All Comments on 'Absence'

I saw you wearing a sad smile

memories rose after a long while

acute thorns of the past been eroded

to soft dents, your mind unclouded

tears once cried

to salt they dried

permeated down into the ground

feeding a seedling's roots in the wound

It's nice to see both "M8DovGlaz" 's poem "Absence" and the poem posted in reply in a Comment by another reader.

E. in New York City ("nycreader" at Literotica.)