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by GoddessWithRedHair

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YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Vivid!

Rambled, jambled, scratched thoughts jumbled with triplets in a way that creates some vivid imagery.

A strong read.

GoddessWithRedHairGoddessWithRedHairabout 20 years agoAuthor
YYD

Thanks? I think? It was supposed to be

Rambled

Jambled

Scrambled

with a bit of structure thrown in for good measure

If it was a strong read... why only a 50?

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A bit of cynicism run amok.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
descriptive

Lovely rendering ~ delightful word play.

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