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by MikeIvy

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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End it here!

I have no doubt.

100, you don't need to tell us the last three lines.

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

This poem has potential for a 'sequel', to continue the story of Adam & Eve, such as after he 'eats' the apple...... ;)

softsmilesoftsmileabout 13 years ago
wonderfully succinct!!

I love this! And I agree, "I have no doubt" would make for a perfect ending. I also adore the way "not" and "doubt" are near rhymes. :)

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