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EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyabout 15 years ago
Nice

I enjoyed reading it - quite nice. I found 're-earth' a little jarring, but don't have a good alternative, given the limits of the form.

'to earth' - seems to lose context

'to dust - lose rhyme

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years ago
interesting

I wanted to say that I liked "re-earth"

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