All Comments on 'Adventure under the stars'

well done, a few elements might be normalized although exaggeration for art is acceptable, i,e, "entry to my soul, honey dew,panther,hilt, 91/2 inch", but very nice. The language in first two verses is very well done, as the sex passes foreplay it becomes more cliched and loses a little, but that is my opinion and perhaps I am wrong, All in all very pleasing erotic sensual poem that is nice to find here.

I was touched by her intimate words