by Sabina_Tolchovsky
After the first fourlines, you pulled this off quite well.
The first four lines, gave me a bad feeling of deja vu.
Very strong ending.
Bit unsure about the stanza beginning 'Esthetic expositor' but the end from 'compositions' on is shimmery super.
~Compositions of
gelatin silver emotion.
Washes,
to expose the sin.
I lay more than just my body
before your lens. ~
This was so fluid and seamless that it makes the beginning feel a little rough.
I love " gelatin silver emotion"
Thank you