All Comments on 'After School Special'

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Alaris46Alaris46about 12 years ago
enjoyed the poem

very good I am new to literotica but have been writing erotica and not sharing for a couple years.

AmyfriendAmyfriendalmost 17 years ago
A very moving and erotic...

poem that is dripping with sensuality and lust. Guaranteed to be a good substitute for Viagra in many guys.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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Nice little piece of erotica. This is weakened by the many instances of gerunds which lend it an air of passivity.

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