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KOLKOREover 17 years agoI felt secondary
I believed you, yet as a poem it was missing. It was too much on the level of generalizations. See most adjectives: I feel happy does not cut it. Happy how? Its supposed to be an intimate poem.
duddle146over 17 years agoContentment.
A magic place ~ a woman sexually excited but at complete peace with herself.
LeBrozover 17 years ago~~
The passions of love and lust imposing such contradictory feelings of wants and needs.
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