by erectus123
Tales of such account, so many women you mount. Five start delisious treat, hope the food was good to eat.
Pulled out'n fucked Bea , til' it felt right
Re-entered Olive : she came with a scream
Finished in Bea ;'twas a sweet dream !"
--- immortal lines Erectus , thnx for sharin' .....
around 42nd Street when it was a most interesting place. I don't have quite the same memories, but I know the area well and that it was rife with action. Probably still is though more on the downlow.
Your poems are looking tighter and more well-crafted to me all the time. Just my opinion and thank you for the read. :-)
I received your emails, the analogy does not quite hold, harassment? more like thrust and parry, and this isn't facebook, some people are quite serious about comments. I can be like sandpaper. I admit it, however your friend can be quite irritating and showed up at exactly the wrong time twice. I am not sure he is what he claims to be still. And both you and he have posted the 1201 poems. I consider this closed, I even recommended two of yours in the thread ( because they where good), don't reopen, as I basically wrote this place off.
thanks for your comments, valued as always. Come and visit me in Los Angeles, we can smoke the peace pipe and drink some Irish whisky, my treat. Can get you a hot date as well if you like, just let me know your preferences and date of arrival....er
.....sorry, tmi I guess. I feel like I need a shower - and not a cold one. Voted for effort not content. I advise 1201 to pass on the invitation given your taste in "hot dates" :-)
I'm sure we can oblige, you are welcome also. There is a fine line between what men do and what you think they do, welcome to the dark side of erotic poetry...
if you are writing erotic poetry you should feel comfortable with us bad boys, rather than speak poorly of my tasting of women for that is what men do, and those who do not are men in name only