All Comments on 'Always Loved Bad Girls'

by erectus123

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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
Ahhh my friend

Tales of such account, so many women you mount. Five start delisious treat, hope the food was good to eat.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
'started on Olive ,she felt so tight

Pulled out'n fucked Bea , til' it felt right

Re-entered Olive : she came with a scream

Finished in Bea ;'twas a sweet dream !"

--- immortal lines Erectus , thnx for sharin' .....

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
I see you spent some time

around 42nd Street when it was a most interesting place. I don't have quite the same memories, but I know the area well and that it was rife with action. Probably still is though more on the downlow.

Your poems are looking tighter and more well-crafted to me all the time. Just my opinion and thank you for the read. :-)

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
a personal note

I received your emails, the analogy does not quite hold, harassment? more like thrust and parry, and this isn't facebook, some people are quite serious about comments. I can be like sandpaper. I admit it, however your friend can be quite irritating and showed up at exactly the wrong time twice. I am not sure he is what he claims to be still. And both you and he have posted the 1201 poems. I consider this closed, I even recommended two of yours in the thread ( because they where good), don't reopen, as I basically wrote this place off.

erectus123erectus123over 10 years agoAuthor
personal note 1201

thanks for your comments, valued as always. Come and visit me in Los Angeles, we can smoke the peace pipe and drink some Irish whisky, my treat. Can get you a hot date as well if you like, just let me know your preferences and date of arrival....er

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
Euck....

.....sorry, tmi I guess. I feel like I need a shower - and not a cold one. Voted for effort not content. I advise 1201 to pass on the invitation given your taste in "hot dates" :-)

erectus123erectus123over 10 years agoAuthor
Oh Tristesse2

I'm sure we can oblige, you are welcome also. There is a fine line between what men do and what you think they do, welcome to the dark side of erotic poetry...

erectus123erectus123over 10 years agoAuthor
and Tristesse2

if you are writing erotic poetry you should feel comfortable with us bad boys, rather than speak poorly of my tasting of women for that is what men do, and those who do not are men in name only

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 Personal Bio Notes: I was born in Belfast, passing through my dear mother's loins, and that is where I find most comfort, passing through with other women, not my mother. I survived through the years of Irish troubles and immigrated to the USA after various family tragedies...