All Comments on 'Amante XV'

in a silken gown, reclines on a day bed, and calls it's lover with a patient hand.

The mindset that writes these poems is truly a seductress and a gourmand of all things sensual.

Gracias

Your poem has been mentioned in Monday's New Poems reviews.

Wow. I can see all this unfolding before my eyes. Such a vision of sweet-slow-love ... yet ... it grabs one, pulls them in, did not move my eyes off the words till the very last word dripped into my heart~

Lovely, and Hot~!!

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I am your Artemis, you must be contrite,

my sin. I’ll capture secrets of your heart.

I’ll bid you whisper, pídame esclavo, for night

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Beautiful imagery~!!!

One night, when it's quiet and I'm not distracted, I'd love to read the series in its entirety.

Loved it!

Thanks.

~ J

of a grand seductress in latin heat...the visuals are more than inspiring sweet lady..smilin..blue

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