All Comments on 'Amarillo Rose and the Abrasive one'

I love the way you are always reaching. You don't stay in the same mood of poetry. You express so many sides of this beautiful way to convey everyday events.

Very descriptive... showing and telling. Your prose has followed you to poetry. Nice work!

scratchy chin laps

biting growl of a dog

like swimming in a muddy bog

clamy, Lady Laura, water logged~

Wowzza..What a hot lil scene..

Loved this one too.

You just know this was a great time had by all.

I loved the flow, it was steamy and sexy.

Keep'm comin'~~!!

these poems possess Art...you're really setting a mood.

Art..

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scratchy chin laps

biting growl of a dog

like swimming in a muddy bog

clamy, Lady Laura, water logged

HOT! Wow... question for you.. the rhyming is not consistant but flows so well...is this bending the rules? If it is bend babe.. bend..for it works well here!

Du Lac

telling line from a great series! Keep going!