by My Erotic Tale
Every one of these are written with Art's flare. Which is fascinating and entertaining.
How much more can she endure. I loved this one too. A very differ ring to it, and yet..
She takes it all in stride and goes on. This is one tough lady. Love her courage and determination. I just seeem to think somehow.. she loves this life..even after all she has ben thru.
Just my opinion. More I say..
Have to know what happens next to this cheeky lil broad.(grins)
The stacatto rhythm of your lines and rhyme are entertaining and very good. Now, perhaps you can explore the more ballad-like story poems of EA Poe or Robert Service? I'm sure you would make some wonderful odes.