by ShinigamiSama
This is the second of your poems I've looked at and the words for you are still, spell check:
strenght
imesureable
shal
wittness
weild
ulitmate
sacriface
Are just the quick ones that stand out that make sense.
Your poems could be ever so much better if you checked your spelling.
entry that could have been very good if not for the numerous spelling mistakes. Don't rush, buy a dictionary and use spell checkers. There is hope and a light at the end of the tunnel.