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AngelineAngelineover 13 years ago
I'm not sure I get

how someone can be sanguine and officious at the same time, never mind the other discriptors but maybe it doesn't matter because this poem just feels fun to say. If also feels unfinished to me like maybe it was originally intended to be more? Either way I enjoy reading poetry where the carefully juxtaposed words propel the poem forward (maybe set the pace is a better way to put it).

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
I really love your stuff.

But I don't quite get it most of the time.

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