by LonelyLord
Wow AGAIN~~!!! I can see you are a deep thinker.. This poem goes deep. One has to really look and see thru the game.. Goin on all around.. The game being played by all.. Awesome Poem~~!! The flow is great. The style is very strategical.. Very deep poem.. Love Love Loved it.. I want to see more still yet.. More poems I say~~!!!
Bit of a sing-song feel here;
Doesn't go anywhere, but doesn't need to ~
It's an end in itself.
A very rythymic piece that plunges along stanza after stanza to completion.