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Ashesh9Ashesh98 months ago

with a firm hand on thy ass

i refused a job[ blow]

butt on thy stinging butt:

i landed many a blow

sharp 'n sweet:

high'n low....!!!

erectus123erectus1238 months agoAuthor

Thank you my brother Ashesh9, love ma man!

erectus123erectus1238 months agoAuthor

Correction-The title, Requiem for Anal, was garbled in the electronic transcription but was correct in my copy.

Peter_ClevelandPeter_Cleveland8 months ago

A fun poem. The first stanza--a song of frustration--is especially comic. (I'm almost sorry ol' Bubble-Butt changed her mind and said yes.)

erectus123erectus1238 months agoAuthor

Thank you, Peter, Sir, My silly poems don't deserve your comments but I am very appreciative. Stay well. Here, all are active on the Western Front.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

How true it is. After anal, they will never leave you.

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