All Comments on 'Ancient Dance'

Like the sensual flow here.

More Please ~

Your poem has been mentioned in today's New Poems Reviews.

and was taken in by the rest...nicely written..bluerains

Attractive, engaging title, but the overuse of punctuation/ill line breaks, detract from the body of the poem.

Nice flowing imagery;

a good start ~

welcome to Lit - will be looking for more.

I'm reminded of words from an old college prof that the most beautiful prose & poetry is often the most simple. This is a new voice, and an elegant voice, and I would encourage her to bring more of her work to us...

You moved me deeply with it.

First peom, read here, and enjoyed so much, will look out for more peoms, thanks...