All Comments on 'and so it rains'

by sweet GA peaches

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
regret

Deep dark pools of sadness and sorrow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very moving

There is a lot of emotion in this.

Beautifully done,I envy your talent!

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Could feel the sadness falling from the sky and running down your cheeks.

ty,bd

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sweet

I love this GA.

Just sweet ... sexy ... sad.

Think those are what makes

a poem peeps do not forget.

I wanna wrap my arms around

him and just breath ~

Sweet read my Friend `

CuriouswifeCuriouswifeover 18 years ago
Beautiful

Absolutely beautiful! I am really enjoying your writing. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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This is very nice, really drew me in, but a spell check would have made a difference.

Tattler

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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not cheerful or joyful

with sensuous eros;

the night we dread

brings such a dark read

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a hint

of soulful sad ...sharing a low moment..described well..blue

J.DoeJ.Doeover 18 years ago
~

Reads like a whisper and thick with emotion.

Anonymous
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