All Comments on 'And The Beat Goes On'

i've never anything that i can relate to so closely. it is haunting. and you express it so clearly and so exact. ty for writing this.

Love as an injured little sparrow ~ mercy has his eye on the

the little sparrow, lest the little fellow fall.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 33,000 poems.

Read this slowly and thoughtfully;

You can feel the pain of the battered spouse becoming trapped in a nightmare universe.

Yep Loved it! Fantastic stuff

enjoyed every word, i think

this is one of my favorites

of yours and i know i will read

it many more times.

Thank you for the words

I loved them all.

~ J