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Speechless. This is beautiful; the imagery is magical.

I just edited this poem and cut out the beginning stanza... because it was too bulky. Now, I'm not so sure. Maybe I need to find a pleasant middle ground. The original stanza that came before the 'make of me a thousand paper cranes' was:

Now, I would make a thousand moments for you

and fan them out beneath you in a wild splendor

and look up at you with weighty possibility

and ask of you to do impossible magic.