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by SavgeWolf

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Beautiful

I wish my husband could write something like that to me. Very beautiful and sincere. I felt like I was looking in a window at your life with your wife. Great job,

quietpolyquietpolyabout 20 years ago
well now

The secret to a happy marriage is to make your wife feel like a goddess. This poem shows you are wise.

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
A Fine Gift for Mother's Day

Quite different from a lot of the poet's other work,

this Mother's Day tribute shows a soft side to the wolf,

but I think he gains strength from it and displays more talent than he often shows.

This time SavageWolf writes what he "really" knows and feels,

and it is good.

There are many fine poetic phrases in this piece.

The first to strongly catch my eye was:

"Each day, as sure as the Sun

you rise and move our family

on a reluctant beginning,"

Thank you for sharing this.

Please write some more.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A Mother's Day devotional to a wife;

How long did it take her to read this

And how many times did she have to dry her eyes?

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Heartfelt thoughts.

A husband's special tribute to a loving wife and a nod to the happiness of having been given a beautiful daughter. A lovely rendering. One can almost feel the happiness exuding from this offering.

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