All Comments on 'angle and view, deja vu'

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duckiesmutduckiesmutalmost 18 years ago
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One question:

'infuse'...The only definitions I know for this word wouldn't quite fit in its home in this poem. Am I being forgetful, or should it be replaced with a different noun?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I really like this.....

Shorten it up to save the beat and live it again.

This is next door to Damn Good! sandspike

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Another day, not quite like yesterday,

But a harbinger of tomorrows;

Bit of a darker finish here.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sin?

This rendering is for everyone who ever just wanted to let their lawn grow ~ I like the idea of sitting back and watching the grass grow shaggy...

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