by cavu182
that exists because of your chosen boppy kind of beat... i can imagine someone doin' their walk down the street to this rhythm.
as for the poem, well, i think it has more depth than first appears. it grows on me the more i read it.
missus roses poems that r so cryptic they r not even understandable at least your poem makes sense.
5 but I question the title, my reading of this is it is supposed to be flip, esp the toss away lines at the end.
Hard to take seriously because the rhyme makes it come over flippant. Rhyming poetry has a place; it's not next to serious content. This is not a personal attack, I just thing your energies could be better directed.