by Belegon
Bare naked hunger, digitized for transmission! Very nice, Belegon.
This was outstanding work!
I didn't have to guess what's going on. You simply said it straight up. This I like. I was really drawn in by this piece. Thanks for the great read, Dana
Super job on this poem, Bel....love it!
You have my number, call me ;)
Your line breaks make your poem a bit choppy. You may want to lengthen them for a smoother read.