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by demure101

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
wow

that was a brilliant observation, ashes

greyish fluffiness this is nice. counterintuitive, never saw a combo like that, but you do this too rarely

5ed

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Funerary celebrations

I like this poem. I agree with this speaker in his desire for a celebration of his life. My funeral plans include lots of singing and tambourine-playing and hand-clapping...like church, where I grew up. No mourning for me, please!

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Cosmic

return ...but don't forgo those that care to wake you away to do so....

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IF THAT IS A FINAL WISH

do the pyre in an arid desert. TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Demure , if you jst add "h9 " to your poetry title you get my name !!!

Regards , A9

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Ashes to ashes , dust to dust !

If murder does' t kill you , Old age must !!!

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