All Comments on 'ass is precipice, fucker'

I love the energy in this poem. makes me want to bury my face in a pillow knuckles clenching sheet and wait to see what happens

Very tight and powerfully written

although not to my taste.

I agree with your categorization

but most at Literotica will not.

You may have cost yourself some reads and votes.

Powerful; you write with such strength and insight. I read your poems and think you are so observant and in touch with what you feel

It's actually not the words themselves, edgy as they might be that gives this poem it's strength, but the jagget, spitting rhythm in which they are delivered. Mr walker knows his shit.

non-erotica my precipice. This one screamed and moaned. Powerful, and interesting phrasing kept up an incredible pace. Hot, savage, and sexual.

very good

jim : )

I can see why Peter wrote this under one of his alts;

It is brutal, direct, and sexually charged,

For those oriented to this fashion.

Taken in the most savage way ~ a classic case of brutality run amok.