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twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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This is excellent, my gut felling is that it would be better served if the first word in every line wasn't capitalized, but maybe it was done in MS word.

But men and women

Are so lost in transactions,

They've all forgotten

How to care; when cash

And flesh are absent, so are

Admiring glances;

vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
Maybe centered too,

But that could be just me. I really liked it.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hurti...