All Comments on 'At The Mall'

this made me laugh. A funny and enjoyable poem

Is that all?

You got off cheap!

LOL! I wanted to write about these big butts getting in my way when I was shopping for Christmas, but I swear I have writers block. I sweated and panicked when shopping alone, and when I got home, I felt like I was going to pass out. The shit we had to deal with before getting to the cashier! Ack! I decided to shop for the rest online. I did much better. :)

I hope you're not bruised anywhere!

Awesome poem, sack. I felt I was right there with you. I enjoyed.

aka saldne

This delightful take on the Season of Good Will really rings my chimes. *grins* I think two words sum everything up nicely ~ "emaciated wallet." Fun and a delight to read.

A poem about shopping ~ I'm getting tired already.