All Comments on 'Autumn'

The lady gives what he wants, he grins unsure now - she grins too, "hey, all of us are living together"

two merry couples, making love, now that's better than a job!

Enjoyed the take off on several old tunes. Quite clever.

...so `nuff said.

.............of dishing out the "E"s this poem would get one. Great work and a breath of fresh air.

Tess

This was a real blast to read. :)

Raindrops falling on my head

Water wears away stone koan

Cook calls "dinner." Guys, you win.