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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice!

You helped me imagine it--and want it!

Desire51Desire51about 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

I appreciate you taking the time to let me know you liked it. In fact, I always appreciate feedback, even when it's constructive criticism, about anything I write, so that I have a better idea what works and what needs to be improved upon.the most.

tazz317tazz317about 5 years ago
THE MIND AND SENSES KNOW NO BOUNDS

whether conscious or in a coma, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Luscious

Can I be so bold as to tell you that halfway through reading this that I instinctively found my hand on my cock, rubbing it, wishing I were your lover. Not being a long poem, I stopped, though. Otherwise I would have continued and arrived at a climactic conclusion, if you know what I mean, my dear.

Desire51Desire51about 5 years agoAuthor
Oh, I know exactly what you meant!

Thanks for the compliment!

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Just working day by day to improve who I am, in order to become the person I want to be. Trying to lay my past to rest, and overcome the doubts and fears instilled by others, so I can learn to let go and be free to soar alone, unafraid to reach for the stars and make my own...