All Comments on 'Awakening from a Sugar Coma'

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pelegrinopelegrinoabout 9 years ago

Is morning kicking you in the head Hurry?

I don’t understand the story behind it, but I love its sense of making that one step, building its climax through morning madness, crushing you down seamlessly.

Some lovely imagery also, like "vying for the seeds of interest  held in a shaking hand;"

5ed!

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