All Comments on 'Balfie Is Dead'

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TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
This

is poetry.

Tragic, open, raw,truth.

stunning work

I am speechless

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I agree

This is poetry. A tragic piece, with emotions laid well in the lines... a wonderful piece.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Balfie sounds like a wreck of a man.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Rich imagery

This poem has an undertone of sadness, the imagery here is lovely.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
GONE GONE GONE

changing nothing, TK U MLJ LV NV

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