All Comments on 'Bathing on sand dunes in the Sahara'

by wildsweetone

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cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowover 17 years ago
pretty imagery

"licked morse on my breasts" is very sexy. Sensual poem, WSO.

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
:)

beautiful descriptions and a sweet sentimental feel to this poem. I enjoyed reading

xoxo

maria

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
colorful thoughts and

patterns framing the mind with morsels of warmth...blue

oregon_galoregon_galover 17 years ago
vivid

pictures you paint

loved the line

"burned summer on my skin", loved the read today, thank you.

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