All Comments on 'Battle'

and hoping for a cure. TK U MLJ LV NV

Each day a battle ~ not with guns but within the mind.

Battles and wars

Soldiers and armies

All in the mind is the conflict

Until too late...

and great imagery to boot.....don

Wow~!!

I love your imagery. A wonderfully smooth flow.

The pictures you bring to mind. A lot of emotion here.

I have so been there. That place, where ya have to *breath.. just breath~* almost beggin your mind to chill and just to have some *relief*.

I loved this poem~!!!!

is poetry!! Gave me goose bumps. Wonderfully written!

Great lines here!

'Breathe' I must remember,

take in God's gift of the breath.

Deeply inhaling life's essence

the enemy slowly recedes to the trenches.

and you couldn't have ended it any better. Good work!