All Comments on 'Beachd-Smaoinich'

by cymry

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LeviluvLeviluvover 18 years ago
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Time wears its mantle

as a beggar

wears his rags

defying the immaterial

even unto death.

Just WOW!

bluerainsbluerainsover 18 years ago
I like

Time wears its mantle

as a beggar

wears his rags the use of this phrase..it works the poem for me..pen on...blue

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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But I like,

"Minds travel along

myriad threads spun

by mortal query."

You have blossomed so well, from those first words you left us.

sacksackover 18 years ago
a masterpiece.....

nothing more to say!

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
short span

Only time gets forever older.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
BEING BEACHED OR STRANDED

loneness is not an option. TK U MLJ LV NV

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