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All Comments on 'Becoming His - Pt. 01'

by Maydaypilot

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RiverMayaRiverMayaover 2 years ago

You have captured sensual imagery with this poem, a talent very few possess. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So very sexy as usual. Such a talent.

BiBibaby1982BiBibaby1982over 2 years ago

Hot DAMN! No words can accurately discribe what this made me feel.

Venusinaphrodite_Venusinaphrodite_over 2 years ago

This is brilliant! I can see the images you've painted so vividly contrasting the dark of the woman's room. I imagine the thrum that courses through me whilst reading must be mirroring the one she feels as well.

his_sweethearthis_sweetheartalmost 2 years ago

Gahd. How do you do that?!

JellyishJellyish29 days ago

I see you have captured the adoration of many, including myself. My favorite line? “You're not mine…Yet.”

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Older male. Natural beauty addict. I love. I feel the hard and soft, in most things. I know real and grace, and embrace them. I need to write, and strive to write well, to reach my reader. Flawed, flying blind, but still flying. I value feedback from ratings, public a...