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by Naturemithya

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Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years ago
props for your use of "Camber"

however, the poem as a whole is too wordy. It sorta looks and feels like poetry without tasting like poetry. I don't scroll away feeling like I know anything about naturemithya.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
PEACE IS NOT TAKEN

in bedlam of confusion. TK U MLJ LV NV

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