All Comments on 'Beelzebubbles Speaks 2'

by beelzebubbles

Sort by:
  • 8 Comments
annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
potty humorless

oh come on now little bubbles, that last one was funny, this is not really even clever. Except that word of the day you used in there. I bet my three year old would like it though, he is really into poop jokes right now. He thinks his poopy diapers are cool. Maybe he will grow up to be an art critic. :) Maybe #3 will have a penis in it. Isnt that the next stage? You missed oral!

boxofrocksboxofrocksalmost 20 years ago
bubbles

next time you go to the loo

you know, doing number two...

what ends up on your paper there

and also stains in your underwear

when your mouth is open, that's what we see

maybe you should stick to playing with wee

tit for tat, you and scat

belong together like fleas and a cat

go back to your gutter and play with your poo

the world is better without the likes of you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
now

you sound exactly like senna jawa

lostandfounderlostandfounderalmost 20 years ago
How ironic

using poetry (yes, poetry) as a vehicle to dig at poetry and poets. Points for that.

Pot calling the kettle black.

boxofrocksboxofrocksalmost 20 years ago
awesome poetry

I especially loved the part where it ended!!!

Good job

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

1 was hilarious ~ this not so hot.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
And that's the way it is?

irreverent look at Poets.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE PRINCE OF DEVILS

utters nonsense believed, TK U MLJ LV NV

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous