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splashing in and spots on the car, TK U MLJ LV NV

and the ending i really dig.....nicely done....don

delightful delights

await this day

invitations entice

can you come

out and play

in these fragile

passing spots of sun

lingering light the way

puddling pools

laugh lap and splash

touch my cheek

to wipe the rain away

nice write GP~

HAPPY TURKEY DAY~

short and but not sweet. dark with potential rain clouds.

...and you will write poems that are 'to drown for.'

Very nice.

ty,bd

There's nothing like it,

playing in the puddles left behind

after a hot Southern gusher...

of sunny love...was wondering where You have been hiding...smiles/blue