All Comments on 'Beneath The Gum Tree'

Starting a poem in rhyme, then abandoning the rhyme only to come back to it later, tends to weaken the flow of the work and may cause the reader to lose interest.

A humorous little piece

With imagery intense

As bad as an army of fire ants...

The perils of spending time in the Woodlands ~ insects, insects and more ~ well insects.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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unknown to the revelers what lay there. TK U MLJ LV NV